You...
This is so NOT your first animation, you lying sonuvabitch!
Alright, it was great. I like the flat shading. Voices were nicely done. Now please make more!
You...
This is so NOT your first animation, you lying sonuvabitch!
Alright, it was great. I like the flat shading. Voices were nicely done. Now please make more!
Awesome!
The style, the animation, the art, everything strikes me as very well done. I love your style, and that you actually had the ability as an artist to complete a full idea.
Meh
Animation was pretty smooth, but the drawings were horribly sloppy. Song didn't go too well with the music, either.
SMASHING job, lad! Simply SMASHING!
Sorry I wasn't online for you to tell me about the release- I was having interweb troubles and such...
I was really surprised and delighted to see the finished project. Really AWESOME job. This is without question the finest flash you have ever made. The art itself was good, but the animation was simply phenomenal. I envy your fbf talent!
And you've hit a really sweet chord with the "dark-'n-surreal" style. Can't wait for the next one!
And judging from the number of views you got (over 25 thousand, WOW!) I'd say you got front page. Congratulations, man, congratulations. You're definitley going places. Good luck with life.
Whats up with you Floridians and not coming online whenever I publish a new movie and not being in the base? I thought you got eaten by a tornado... or a garpike...
anyway thanks man!
You seem to be a busy person, so I'll be brief....
(I'm a huge Death Note fan by the way.... not so hot for Harry Potter though) Art was ok, but the animation itself was short, sweet, and to the point.
in short....
WTFMATE
Good old LL....
Great job! You've created a good flash whose quality lies in its message.
Message is always key my friend.
Smashing!
At first I had my doubts... yes, I was afraid this would be a lame, typical anime-ish adaption with a load of unneccessary crap added in. But it turned out awesome. Simply awesome. And most of it was the "twist" at the end. Great job, great job. Lucien Dodge was great narrating, too, as always ^^;
Meh...
I thought this was going to be better, but I found it lacking in several areas. First of all, the graphics are a bit too sloppy. You have relativley static, small-movement FBF with minimal detail-- not good.
Secondly, I see no real plot here. Yes, it's the first episode, but you could have done better than "stereotypical thugs go up to some chick who keeps maps in her shirts, who proceeds to beat the crap out of all of them".... Well, alright, that wasn't the main thing considering how stereotypical EVERYTHING is, but the detail that concerns me most is the crappy dialogue. I mean seriously. That is some CRAPPY dialogue. Any situation, no matter how sterotypical or boring, can be made awesome with well-written dialogue. Work on the script a bit. And the art. And the sound. It could have been much higher quality.
I look forward to improved work in the future.
CHHOTT!!!!
HOT! Hot, man this is hot. I remember seeing the first episode, it wasn't too good- hell, I might have even written a flaming review of it.
Now I'm ashamed. This is totally awesome. You've improved beyond words. Nicely done, lad- a fine job.
;_; if only I had motivation like you.... I can never follow through with a good series.....
Keep on kicking!
Crusty old-timer.
Age 35, Male
Starving Artist
UCF
USA
Joined on 6/10/03